Jahn33's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Comic Page of Relevant Saxon Issue #2]

Trying to decide if I read it like manga right to left or Comic left to right. Lol it makes sense either way.

PigLice responds:

Oh yeah this page layout wasnt the most clear at the top but it is left to right

[Trial of Mandalore]

Art is super cool as far as character style and LOVE the color. Only thing is some of the scenes have an odd perspective, things seem a little warped or off balance and it can be hard to orientate yourself to view the scene. (#5 middle panel was the most obvious example of that)

Also I think there's a handful of typos throughout. (#7 "Everyone I have ever meet" *met & "That's a few to many" *too)

Other than those little gripes dope comic.

SkyHawkins responds:

Thank you so much for the in-depth feedback!
Going forward I’ll try to pay more attention to the perspective. I’ll get to work on fixing typos as well.
The colors are one of my favorite aspects of the project. Tropical_Bird did a phenomenal job making the palettes!
Happy to hear you enjoyed the comic overall

[Shaman]

Very cool, dunno what it's from or if it's original but looks dope. Blood mage? fire mage? idk battle priest even.
Rock on

Sheabudder responds:

It's an original! Why not both Bloodfire mage.

[Very purple]

Idk too much about the digital drawing creation process, but I do know that the hair looks fantastic, ear shape is perfect, and the bags on the eyes reminds me of myself.

Awesome work! Love the detail

NortherlyElf0 responds:

Awe thanks so much! I do bags under the eyes for that exact reason. Im a racoon lol

[Paint Test]

Really abstract. The color should be more vibrant and varied.

NesTheCeleb responds:

Thanks dude

[Paint Test 2]

This one is a lot better than the first. Very abstract.

NesTheCeleb responds:

Thanks a bunch :)

[Babe 2]

Is that a double barrel in her hand? It's a little small and off proportion. Her legs are off proportion as well, they're both different size and her knee is a bit funky. Needs more detail on the eyes and are those eyebrows or raisins? Good detail on jacket and shoes. Hair and ear could use work. There isn't any obviously visible shading or lighting. Background is good, i guess it suits her. Also her sig isn't lit..

Sirrom396 responds:

i know

[Ultimate Chimera Hunt]

I like the brushes you use! The shading is nice as well but the dragon looking things tail shadow seems a bit off to me.

JamSession responds:

I think the tail was off, but it was a quick stream drawing.
I'll work on shadow placement, thanks for the advise.

That and I use default brush on photoshop only, so there's no different brush used

[Save Me!]

What do you drawl these in?

It's a good eye.

TheyCallMeCaudex responds:

Thanks! I drew this one in gimp.

[Badass [rough]]

Ugly girl, or gay guy? Cant tell. The left gun is a little slopy and the anatomy is a little off.

TheyCallMeCaudex responds:

I know that the left gun is not so good (only, like, my 3rd time in illustrator), and the anatomy is a bit off. I did not use a character base (at the time i did not even know what one was, so, yeah). It is female, hence the dress, long hair, and stockings. I wouldn't go so far as to say she's ugly, though.