Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Obsolete Sky]

I like that beginning plucky sound, the kick is a little weak could be more punchy (or if you like it that way so be it) Thank you for not using the same drum loop for 5 minutes. It's simple at the beginning then you spice up very nice very nice. kind of average and quite though.

OcularNebula responds:

yep, always on point

the most frustrating thing is probably having a song like this end up being too quiet

it always feels like a compromise between distorting the initial balance and shape of sounds with post production and the overall punch of a track, though I am actually in no position to be concerned with the "purity" of sounds, just because I don't typically have the level of control required to make a significant difference, but I think I do usually prefer a dryer mix (largely due to laziness)

[Seek Bromance Remix]

Sounds a little repetitive. The vocals fit well.

DJMERKEREE responds:

Hey thanks a lot man, honestly the acapella was edited well enough that there wasn't too much warping required, just finding the right key.

[Void]

Not a big fan of industrial music so my review might be a bit ehhh but IF I did like industrial music I guess this song would be cool.. Me myself likes the lyrics, except when you yell.

Spoonerang responds:

There's a wide range in Industrial, and this song is really pushing it. Bottom line, it's very experimental. The ending with the screaming is probably the only real Industrial thing about this song, sadly. False advertising a bit, but... eh. I don't like genres.

Thanks for the review nonetheless! >:D

[A Thanksgiving to Forget]

The loop repeats itself within the loop XD
Not something I would listen to all the time but would be nice background music for a game or party or just hangout.

[Gofa Kior's Elf]

Kinda spooky... Like the beat but the background sounds make it seem like an ambient song. Be good in a video game.

[MyBoyfriend makesme happy]

Verry simple, very creative. It's good to express your feelings in music. I'm happy for you two.

Genraltweet responds:

Aw, thanks! :D Music is the best way to express yourself when you find no words to say

[Red]

:) Who knew re had a sound? Cant say anything that hasn't already been said. Me gusta

[EnNinja - The Epic Jump]

Cant say it's my favourit sung... It's like 2 sounds battleing baq and forth.
Cant say it's the worst ever though...

Might want an equipment upgrade *cough cough no more club create how about fl studio cough*

EnNinja responds:

Doesn't have a PC yet but soon :/

[Pixel Blending]

Same here, heard it from Steve run. Though your song deserves to be in a better game it did get you lots of positive comments!!

[Azure Apex]

Jolly good show, though the kick is verry baisic it's what makes house-house right? I like that it changes up every once in a while to keep it interesting. The ending made me giggle for some reason, idk im weird, good song though, cant say it's the best I have ever heard, but if all songs were perfect what would we do without the need for improvement ( Correct me if i'm wrong )

P.S. It dose loop pretty fine, accident? Probably, ive had it happen.

BTW: Sorry this wasn't exactly helpful, i'll try harder next time.

OcularNebula responds:

well, you're right about the kick

yeah, the ending was kinda fun and different, huh? I was initially looking for an instrument that would be somehow evocative of birds for that extra bit of melody, but instead I ended up with this?!?!?

I really enjoy the level of modesty in your critique, and yes, you are certainly correct in that we always have plenty of room to improve our skills, no matter the craft - it's probably one of the more interesting aspects of pursuing anything creative - the ability to gradually improve and notice the effect(s) it has on your work!

as for the looping, I typically cut off my endings at an even amount of measures with some *'verb n' 'lay* still trailing, so it sometimes ends up looping well :p

looking forward to more reviews from you!