Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

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Pretty interesting to listen to on its own. I feel like it will be a lot better in the context of a game or show, but alone it's kind of awkward.

at 0:28 things get weird. is it off beat? not sure what's going on. no transitions makes the overarching objective hard to follow.

Tune is catchy though which is a plus.
Sounds are unique and hi enough quality.

[FastInsOi - La FX]

It's nice to see there's still some people out there trying to make some true trance music.

Good song overall, feels like a little sound in a big hall though.
Needs some more stuff to fill in the gaps.

[Vista Sounds - Observation]

Nice man, that's a good tone. The base-line is actually interesting and doesn't just follow along with a lead. You have a real good use of different chords on that keyboard.

The song is full and doesn't lack anything. That snare is so crisp I'm impressed.

The only thing I could criticize would be the last half minute is a little cluttered, and the song overall is repetitive, but I honestly believe you did that as a stylistic choice so...

What I'm getting at is GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!

Vista-Sound13 responds:

Wow thanks, I really appreciate that!

EDIT: You know, the repetition in this track was done as a stylistic choice, but I tried to get less repetitive, but it's not that simple to do so, but that's alright.

[Quarantine Vibes]

Great production value. Sounds professionally made mastering and levels are good.

The song itself just isn't extremely enjoyable to me. I get this was kind of a "challenge" project, but I find the lead ring to be meh at best and the bass to be very rudimentary.

[camsn8ke - snowing in nyc]

Oh dang this is a legit lo-fi track man.

Strange that you are an undiscovered artist because this is good man.

All the sound tones are pretty awesome actually, although the "bass guitar" seems kinda robotic and a bit too.... what's the word... wobbly?

At 2:09 the transitions are a but too jarring and take away from the chill

Great track though

camsn8ke responds:

hey! thanks a lot! i appreciate your kind words
and yes, i have actually been kinda "undiscovered" artist for like two years now (I got fl studio like 10 months ago and before that I just used crappy apps on my phone lol)
i actually record myself playing bass since I have one, i actually don't use plugins to make bass guitar (e.g. boobass)
*googles the word jarring* oh yeah I should have fixed that transition good ear
thanks for the awesome review hopefully I see your comments around newgrounds xD

Edit: Thanks for good rating too :)