Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[No More Time Travelers Anymore]

awesome Rhode progression intro.
the slammed chords get a bit off beat at times, which is okay I'm struggling keeping tempo myself.

neat little song though rock on!

[chill out]

Oh hot dog dude this is good, love the grunge/industrial vibe and those vocals are dope dude.... seriously jealous! Rock on man

FOUNDDEADINLA responds:

lol i didnt realize how industrial some of the stuff i write is until youve said it. also thanks for the vocal compliment :)

[Anger Management]

Nice build up, the bass panning at :23 is great

The slides on the bass mean you really can work that FL piano roll.

The sounds are balanced pretty good too, great depth of sound. I actually also have a MPK mini haha great little piece of hardware to play with the melody and not having to use the keyboard.

Not personally a fan of the genre though, I can acknowledge your skill in FL though!

xYoungMotionx responds:

Thanks! This usually isn't my genre I was just messing around because I want to try every genre, but thanks for the feedback always appreciated.

[Graveyard Theme - Zenovia]

This piece has a great atmosphere actually, gets that full ear sounding has a good amount of tension and relief, maybe play with the velocity of the bell a bit and change the attack up so it's not so jarring. All the ambient noises really make the song feel full.

Great graveyard vibe, keep it up.

[Empress of Chaos sfx (EOL COVER) - Zenovia]

Out of curiosity what's your software you're using? The strings actually sound pretty okay.
That build up @ :07 to :12 is phenomenal.

There's a few parts where your violin kinda falls apart and sounds unnatural. I'm not a pro at orchestral stuff, but it sounds odd at :19, :27, :34, :42, :50 and then right after :50 there's something up with the chord structure causing 100% tension.

Keep working at it! the chord at 1:45 was great and strong! play around with some more things like that.

[Medieval]

Very awesome dude, the weird rythm at 1:04 really hits weird (is that the harpschord you were talking about?) anyways awesome track overal!

[nothing more than a dream]

YO! those drums are so natural sounding I love it. This isn't in standard tuning is it?
This is awesome man.

Yoshiii343 responds:

It's in standard tuning! The rhythm guitar can be played on the *A, D and G strings.

EDIT: forgot my own riffs lol

[Headache]

The violin sounding synth in the beginning seems a little chopy on it's transitions, even if you weren't going for that natural sound it needs a little love in the mixer.

the beat buildup is alright, kinda glitchy. I like the bass and lead wobble, although it sounds like there is space in between that needs to be filled up. Possibly that mid sound pluck at 1:13 playing at the same time, speaking of which the pause at 1:13 happens seemingly random, I get it's good to break up the repetition, but maybe add a drumfill or white noise uplifter to impact to downlift so that it fits in a bit more, instead of sounding like my phone dinged me i got a text in the middle of my song.

Second main part sounds like a copy past of the first part.

Outro is kinda neat, keep it up and rock on man.