Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[C R A S H _-_-_]

Not too bad a track. Pretty standard trap style. You've got some interesting little breakbeats in there. Keep working in fl studio. Unfortunately I just don't groove with the genre, the melody at the end is neat.

[Im Not Sure]

Great piano piece! Love the tone, maybe a tad heavy on the reverb? Some rhythmic errors and at 1 minutes in that whole part really needs to be redone. It's not really a horror vibe so much as an uncomfortable dissonance of someone slapping a piano... The intro is really pretty though!

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Solid man I'm not really a fan of the genre but this bit takes me back to midnight club days. Rock on man.

[Funster10123 - Café]

How does better internet make the audio quality increase? Uploading better file?

Overall the song is alright as a little piano solo, the velocity on the chords doesn't change much. and it plays at a deadly repetitive rhythm. Was this made on sequencer piano roll or did you play the piano itself?

Funster10123 responds:

It's something I made in one night on my piano :/ but thxs 4 the feedback. I rly appreciate it (oh yea, the better internet just helped it be less glitchy at times)

[Ground Wire]

I love love love daft punk. This song is a great tribute to their greatness!!
I'm good with the hi-hat level, but the synth sounds themselves are very raw sounding. I'm not a fan of how the bass rubs on some notes. At 2:14 when it plays by itself though is sounds really good.

I'm excited to hear what vocals you come up with ! Rock on man

Almost-Ichabod responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I think I fixed the "raw" sound by adding a bit of modulation to the chords and messing with the ADSR some, I hope that's what you meant by that. The bass rubbing on some notes though I'm not quite sure how to fix or what you mean by that. I assume it means that some bass notes clash with other notes? If so I often look over that and that's a big problem of mine.

[Alone and Stinky]

I am also alone and stinky. This song is not too stinky though.

CaperCube responds:

thanks! I made sure to shower before posting this

[Synthwave_Feels]

When I think of 'Classic' synthwave I think of Kavinsky. A more dirty city driving a cool car into a lo-fi sunset through a futuristic city.

The feel of the song overall is great, I love the way you fade in the drum beats. The cutoff on the bass sidechain is super duper strong. Maybe that was your stylistic choice, but it's a bit aggressive for my taste. Overall dope song, keep it up and rock on man.

[An Autumn Afternoon]

Neat track I dig the vibe definitely belongs in a video game or something. The sounds are all filling which is great. Something sounds off note-wise though it's hard to pinpoint.

I think it's the background pad/strings and the bass not getting along.

anyways I also Second HoboKa305's notes as well. Nice track and rock on.

[Ticking Theme]

Neat piano piece, the library seems okay not the highest quality one I've heard, but I dig that the velocity on the notes at least change up.

Interesting take making the higher octave notes repeat and the bass notes change around.
Overall it could be a bit more interesting and the tone could use some work. Good work for a little experimental loop though.