Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[rose-tinted glasses]

Dude this song absolutely SHREDS idk how you're so good man keep it up. Love the warm crunchy tone

Is this song not on your bandcamp?

Yoshiii343 responds:

thanks! practice/jamming on your instrument sometimes yield fruit

>Is this song not on your bandcamp?

not yet ;)

[Time Limit]

Very classic electro vibe, idk why It makes me think of early megaman games or ps1 gran turismo racing. The overall pacing of the song is a bit uncomfortable to me though, you don't HAVE to stick to classic structures but the song still gotta blend together, this piece kinda sounds like a collection of random melody ideas into one. also at 2:45 the bell sound in the background kinda clashes with the rest in my opinion, not sure if I'd leave that goin with the other synths.

TrandafirTeodora responds:

Thank you very much.
I originally was going to get rid of the bell later, but I did not know how.

[wait, i forgot the song name]

Very spooky sounding just in time for halloween
I'm digging the jungle drum breakbeat although it gets repetitive, are there no variations through the whole song except at 1:36? I'd recommend have at least 3 different variations that cycle through and then throw in some fills also.

gwaresr48 responds:

I Am Sorry For That! This Was Rushed

[perhaps things will turn out better]

Dang dude, the intro blast was quite something!! Personally I'm against whatever tone design that lead has, but everything else hits the mark. especially whatever is goin on at the 0:25 dude that riff was awesome

[{dj-N} Fancy House]

Good ole big house/dance sounding clip; has a lot of good going on here those plugins sound awesome. It's pretty bland sounds like a great start of an idea that could be turned into a full song, just needs a bit of spice and flavor a little breakdown maybe with some funky bassline or blend the genre to make it have some cool dubsteppy growls or change the drum pacing on a part to make it drum n bass style. Or don't if you were goin for a minimalist dance/house track that's cool too.

[Chaotic Light - Zenovia]

Good overall vibe, maybe it will fit better in the background of a game rather than sitting and listening to it alone. A few recommendations I'd have is work on making the note velocity change up every once in a while on those quarter notes. The song kinda drones on and that piano is really harsh at that level of velocity. The background arpeggio synths help a lot to fill in the background. Personally I find the lead to be yes spooky and dark but also it seems like note choice is almost random is AALWAYYS just hitting on beat with no swing at all.

[Rock]

This is really a banger dude! I love the tone with the harmonic and you're way better at keeping a beat than me

[Darlene (Instrumental)]

I feel like this shoulda been in the Tony Hawk Pro Skater remaster

[New Girl]

Nice plain and simple punk rock track.