This is good but the drums or.. Drum XD is repetitive, throw some random tats maybe increase reverb, also there is a balance in melodies, too few & simple = Boreing
Too many & loud = Anoying, this was like.. 1/2 a melodie away from the sweet spot
This is good but the drums or.. Drum XD is repetitive, throw some random tats maybe increase reverb, also there is a balance in melodies, too few & simple = Boreing
Too many & loud = Anoying, this was like.. 1/2 a melodie away from the sweet spot
Honestly I thought Fantasyland was horrible...I was actually about to delete before I read this LOL
hey hey hey man, diggin it, are you new to NG?
Anyway, the sounds should be more crisp and sharp, Good though, do you want me to scout you?
Yeah I'm pretty new to NG :D, please do!
Thanks!
The guitar and lead synth, kind of clash and dont mix properly at times, and the fades or whatever effect happen too often, i really enjoyed that guitar, try tinkering with reverb more
Notes taken :)
The drums do need to be much louder and there is a sound pause, sounds off beat and dont blend toi well, i like the lead synth though
If the pause is that around 0:26~, that was a bass drop, it's a rather low frequency so might be hard to hear :3
The drums is kinda low , need to raise them out of the mud a bit :P
Thanks for the review :)
At first i was like, synth?, & then i was like, modded muffle guitar?, then i was like *Face cactus* PIANNOOO, then i was like OMG EARGASMIC NOISES AHHHHH <3 DwNlOaD
Something tells me you liked it
Very nice but room for improvement, first of it starts and stopps too fast which can sometimes add effect, also it could be longer, it's not really dubstep, more chipstep-Like, i still enjoy how it was composed, overall it's good, just minor tweaks.
(Also i diddnt notice you had lots of thing posted before i pm'ed you XD AND!! Dont be afraid to show emotion on ng, it's proffesional like but you can still have a soul XD)
When you say it stops and starts too fast, and that the end result is adding effects, could you please elaborate? Do I appear to not have a soul?! :p Thank you for the review!
Very good, kind of sounds foggy, did you play this?
nope, soundfont
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