Jahn33's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Time Limit]

Very classic electro vibe, idk why It makes me think of early megaman games or ps1 gran turismo racing. The overall pacing of the song is a bit uncomfortable to me though, you don't HAVE to stick to classic structures but the song still gotta blend together, this piece kinda sounds like a collection of random melody ideas into one. also at 2:45 the bell sound in the background kinda clashes with the rest in my opinion, not sure if I'd leave that goin with the other synths.

TrandafirTeodora responds:

Thank you very much.
I originally was going to get rid of the bell later, but I did not know how.

[wait, i forgot the song name]

Very spooky sounding just in time for halloween
I'm digging the jungle drum breakbeat although it gets repetitive, are there no variations through the whole song except at 1:36? I'd recommend have at least 3 different variations that cycle through and then throw in some fills also.

gwaresr48 responds:

I Am Sorry For That! This Was Rushed

[#GeFem - Warrior]

Summon the spirit of martin Garrix in this one.. haha pretty good song overall

GeFem responds:

Its like a KSHMR style))

[#GeFem feat. Nerøx - 2 The Space]

Sidechain on the piano sounds kewl
Damn that drop is very nice you know how to mix pretty well. Song sounds spooky perfect for Halloween

GeFem responds:

Thx bro!

[#GeFem - Sky]

This is pretty darn good dude! Pretty typical house/dance/trance but seems like you have the interworking mechanisms of fl studio down.

Guess I could be super picky and complain about not velocity and the second drop being a little mediocre BUT honestly this song is great .

GeFem responds:

Thanks for the opinion

[Winter's Love]

Dang man, I love the "epic" vibe this gives off, like the feeling of a progressing journey!

The mastering is super professional ! The song would do good in a retro-sci-fi game/movie setting like tron.

Stargame responds:

I don't know about the professional mastering part - as I am technically still an amateur, there are quite a lot of issues in the track. However, epic and progress in a journey are exactly what I was going for, so thank you for noticing! I'm really glad you got so much enjoyment from the song!

[AuSk - Motivation]

Nice love the sidechain on the bass.
+ points for breakbeat style rythm at 0:41 and increasing the pitch of the snare for the buildup and drop.

Hot damn dude you're good at mastering all the sounds in. A little short and repetitive, so I definitely won't get it stuck in my head but a very masterful track.The melody of those synths at 1:31 gave me chills.

ausk responds:

yooo thank you so much! The buildup snares were a sample, so I can't take credits for that. But thanks for everything you said and for the feedback!

[xoedoxo - sweep]

Love the use of the voxy audio sample.
I dislike trap usually, but I love the beat at 0:49 and the way the bass bends just right.

xoedoxo responds:

Thanks for your feedback! Glad you liked it.

[Funster10123 - Café]

How does better internet make the audio quality increase? Uploading better file?

Overall the song is alright as a little piano solo, the velocity on the chords doesn't change much. and it plays at a deadly repetitive rhythm. Was this made on sequencer piano roll or did you play the piano itself?

Funster10123 responds:

It's something I made in one night on my piano :/ but thxs 4 the feedback. I rly appreciate it (oh yea, the better internet just helped it be less glitchy at times)

[Ground Wire]

I love love love daft punk. This song is a great tribute to their greatness!!
I'm good with the hi-hat level, but the synth sounds themselves are very raw sounding. I'm not a fan of how the bass rubs on some notes. At 2:14 when it plays by itself though is sounds really good.

I'm excited to hear what vocals you come up with ! Rock on man

Almost-Ichabod responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I think I fixed the "raw" sound by adding a bit of modulation to the chords and messing with the ADSR some, I hope that's what you meant by that. The bass rubbing on some notes though I'm not quite sure how to fix or what you mean by that. I assume it means that some bass notes clash with other notes? If so I often look over that and that's a big problem of mine.